Comments on: Excerpt Monday http://www.kbalan.com/2010/03/15/excerpt-monday-2/ Thu, 09 Sep 2010 01:04:42 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Alexia Reed http://www.kbalan.com/2010/03/15/excerpt-monday-2/comment-page-1/#comment-152 Alexia Reed Wed, 17 Mar 2010 16:08:34 +0000 http://www.kbalan.com/?p=856#comment-152 There's some great intrigue here. It makes me wonder just what kind of a mess she got herself into and what she'll have to do to get herself out again. And what her definition of 'worse than death' could be. There’s some great intrigue here. It makes me wonder just what kind of a mess she got herself into and what she’ll have to do to get herself out again. And what her definition of ‘worse than death’ could be.

]]> By: KB Alan http://www.kbalan.com/2010/03/15/excerpt-monday-2/comment-page-1/#comment-150 KB Alan Tue, 16 Mar 2010 02:07:40 +0000 http://www.kbalan.com/?p=856#comment-150 Yay, I'm glad you guys liked it. Thanks! Yay, I’m glad you guys liked it. Thanks!

]]> By: Jeannie Lin http://www.kbalan.com/2010/03/15/excerpt-monday-2/comment-page-1/#comment-149 Jeannie Lin Mon, 15 Mar 2010 23:59:10 +0000 http://www.kbalan.com/?p=856#comment-149 Congrats on the contract! The opening definitely has me intrigued about Connul. Nice build up. Congrats on the contract! The opening definitely has me intrigued about Connul. Nice build up.

]]> By: Shawntelle Madison http://www.kbalan.com/2010/03/15/excerpt-monday-2/comment-page-1/#comment-148 Shawntelle Madison Mon, 15 Mar 2010 19:35:20 +0000 http://www.kbalan.com/?p=856#comment-148 Great build up of tension. I loved these lines: "If he didn’t give her a chance to explain, or worse, didn’t agree to her plan, she was dead. At least, she hoped he’d kill her. Because there were worse things in life than death, and if he didn’t help her, and he didn’t kill her, chances were pretty strong she’d be able to catalog those worse things with intimate detail." You have me thinking that when this dude shows up its not going to be good. At all. Great build up of tension. I loved these lines: “If he didn’t give her a chance to explain, or worse, didn’t agree to her plan, she was dead. At least, she hoped he’d kill her. Because there were worse things in life than death, and if he didn’t help her, and he didn’t kill her, chances were pretty strong she’d be able to catalog those worse things with intimate detail.”

You have me thinking that when this dude shows up its not going to be good. At all.

]]> By: berryblu http://www.kbalan.com/2010/03/15/excerpt-monday-2/comment-page-1/#comment-147 berryblu Mon, 15 Mar 2010 18:43:53 +0000 http://www.kbalan.com/?p=856#comment-147 :) Yay, more of BbS. I like "...playing it safe wasn’t always the smart option." Makes me want to know more. I want this one. Next week would be nice??? ;) :) Yay, more of BbS. I like “…playing it safe wasn’t always the smart option.” Makes me want to know more. I want this one. Next week would be nice??? ;)

]]> By: Jeannie Lin | All that you desire... http://www.kbalan.com/2010/03/15/excerpt-monday-2/comment-page-1/#comment-144 Jeannie Lin | All that you desire... Mon, 15 Mar 2010 14:08:25 +0000 http://www.kbalan.com/?p=856#comment-144 [...] KB Alan, Erotic Paranormal Romance (R) Stephanie Draven, Fantasy with romantic elements (R) Cate Hart, Paranormal YA (R) Jeanne St. James, Interracial Menage (R) Ali Katz, Historical (R) Danielle Yockman, Steampunk (R) [...] [...] KB Alan, Erotic Paranormal Romance (R) Stephanie Draven, Fantasy with romantic elements (R) Cate Hart, Paranormal YA (R) Jeanne St. James, Interracial Menage (R) Ali Katz, Historical (R) Danielle Yockman, Steampunk (R) [...]

]]> By: March Excerpt Monday « Excerpt Monday http://www.kbalan.com/2010/03/15/excerpt-monday-2/comment-page-1/#comment-143 March Excerpt Monday « Excerpt Monday Mon, 15 Mar 2010 13:03:56 +0000 http://www.kbalan.com/?p=856#comment-143 [...] KB Alan, Erotic Paranormal Romance (R) Stephanie Draven, Fantasy with romantic elements (R) Cate Hart, Paranormal YA (R) Jeanne St. James, Interracial Menage (R) Ali Katz, Historical (R) Danielle Yockman, Steampunk (R) [...] [...] KB Alan, Erotic Paranormal Romance (R) Stephanie Draven, Fantasy with romantic elements (R) Cate Hart, Paranormal YA (R) Jeanne St. James, Interracial Menage (R) Ali Katz, Historical (R) Danielle Yockman, Steampunk (R) [...]

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